critiques on my work

[Digitally-Deviant]

Your stuff looks amazing as usually. Love the expressions your character makes.

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Hi cboy123, thanks for your encouragement, I'll do my best!

Hey Digitally-Deviant, good to hear from you! Thanks a lot, you're too kind

Here is the version with the wolf, but not the dick... since it's a very small and simple actor when compared to the other 2, I believe it won't take long for me to add it.
This time around, I won't wait to have all the scheduled sex animations to colour them, I'll start as soon as the frames of the willy are done.

I believe this will both help me keep the hype up and save up some sanity, since colouring it's really boring and I remember how it felt like last time I tried to chew more than 150 frames in one run...

Now, if something sucks or needs some more attentions please let me know; I feel that the ending is too short, they could use half a second of frames to pause properly, but since the next scene is very fast paced sex and I want them to start striking hard I'm unsure about just how much time it's reasonable to wait, so I've added only a couple of frames to the end and made a pencil test where the last one is kept on screen a bit longer.

If this feels to you too shabby, I'll set up something better.

P.S.: I came to understand a while ago that some boards of this forum are used for porn rpg, how is it? Some of you kind readers ever tried to play by forum? Is it free to join? Wanted a preview before bothering users of those boards with very newbie questions

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Halfway through with the dick.

It's a shame she's so fast to sit on it, but to make up for that I've planned some cartoonish things: as she sits the whole thing is put under pressure and bulges.

I thought about it thoroughly and I ended up deciding that she won't feature bulges for now, nor for the next sex loops; while I like these kind of things ( bulges and inflations), I think they both convey implications that I don't find suitable for this specific moment ( girl in control and active).

But all that volume had to go somewhere so, as you can see, right now it bulges like a knotted fire hose.

Tomorrow I'll end this scene, but, before I do, I wanted to share it with you because I believe there's a couple of ways I can finish it and maybe you'd like to add your ideas.

Specifically, I'm uncertain whether to rapidly change the dick's volume and push it inside her almost swooshing ( right now the easing it has allows me to do such a thing), or slowly slide it inside taking advantage of the sudden movement her pelvis does, which should help making it feel somewhat right.

That's what I'm currently thinking

P.S.: I know the dick moves a bit weird right at the beginning ( I've mashed up old frames with current ones but not at the proper point and thus it " jumps") and its head disappears in the middle of the action, this is just a raw pencil test of 3 different cells, I believe alpha channel and overlays will make it look better

[Aledria]

I don't know much about game making or animation but I adore your character models. They both have a lot of personality and great expressions. Hope to see more on this.

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Hay Aledria! Thanks a lot for your compliments!

To be super honest February has been a shitty month, life sucked a bit and I felt the need to practice some more with my drawing skills.
Thus I'm still stuck on colouring the previous scene.

Since I'll drop this project in December I hope to be a bit more productive in the next months, and kind words like yours really helps

I'm uncertain about what will come next because I have already a project on my mind, and I'd like to manage it in a more professional way... so a faster pace, a team to work with and an overall better quality.

I thought I could do such a thing here in my own country but maybe... meh... just maybe... this is not the right place.
So I really wish I'll manage to convince others about my ideas as I've managed to do here in my city.

Just to chit chat a bit about this, in case someone knows better... I thought about making a trip to Los Angeles to begin with, and then maybe Canada or Australia or Germany.
In the next days I'll try to contact a studio in Nuremberg to hear how well they're doing there, making porn games.

I'd like to see other productive realities outside my country, because I feel boredom and feebleness have tainted this place ( at least as far as my connections go).

To be more specific... I won't let your hope down for Bangoonate XXX: I'll make more unless I die, though it could take some time ( as always ).
But what comes next after this seems blurry...

If everything goes as planned and, allow me to be presumptuous, as deserved then I'll gently take the lead of a small team and produce more and more porn stuff for the rest of my life.

This is what I'd like to do... please, consider to stick around to see how it goes

[JacksonGood]

Damn, these are solid. Sexy art style and loving the movements.

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Hay JacksonGood and thanks a bunch!

I'm sorry if in the past months nuffin went much further but I admit I went to draw some other stuff for practice and I've also been horribly and utterly depressed, I'm still not quite done yet!

Awww.... but screw my mood, it's time to get off my ass once more and try to do something

Thanks for still showing support! <3 <3 <3

I'll go draw some moar porn now, take care and stay positive meanwhile m'kay?

[JacksonGood]

Sounds good. I saw your colored drawings in another post, not too bad either. You've got the right mind for it because you seem to understand what's sexy and what's not. That's probably the most important thing. Some games I see here would do better with your artwork.

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Okey so it took just 1 week of " work time" to get this done, but in the past 6 months I never really wanted to find the time for it!
Guess I'm a moron! ~<3

Anyway, the next step is doing the dick and the guy.
And the next step then, is trying to figure out the proper sex loops and climax.

And since I've been so down for like 6 months and I wasted a lot of time, I'm also looking forward to rework many mechanics in the current build.
That is... most of the stuff there would've worked if the game reached a decent development state.

But now I'm not sure about being able to take it that far, so I prefer to resize it a little bit and provide a complete enjoyable experience that gives you the hint of what it could've been, instead of letting you wonder about " why is this feature still missing?"

Here it's the coloured animation

[Nikag]

so, do you keep working on it?