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Parasites

Postby Max3000 » Wed Sep 04, 2013 9:07 pm

Current Version 2, published Sept 05, 2013[click the spoiler to play]
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Changelog:
  • Added introducing text
  • Added new scenes (girl gets absorbed, UFO flys away, brain scene)
  • Added "play again" button at the end


About the story
In the year 1942 Miss Stuart gets absorbed by an alien UFO. The aliens on board seem to be very intelligent parasites, planning to invade earth and repopulate through humans. They make tests with Miss Stuart before they start their invasion.

Credits
Music/Sounds
https://soundcloud.com/ramesesb/lonely-souls-sad-theme
https://soundcloud.com/pinklentil/fuzzy-ribs
http://soundfxnow.com/sound-fx/cricket-chirping/
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Re: Parasites

Postby NeerHeer » Thu Sep 05, 2013 2:54 am

I'm having some issues getting the flash to work I think...right now it's just a loop of cricket sounds, a night sky and a shooting star.


Edit: Wait...you have to click the shooting star or the flashes or something?
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Re: Parasites

Postby Toyloli » Thu Sep 05, 2013 3:59 am

This is a nice little puzzle that could easily be used for a sweet or romantic game, and the effect is quite nice.
Haha, a good means to hentai game this would be if you put the starsigns in the sky and clicking on the correct pattern of stars would summon the greek god associated with it.

You could even make it educational, by having the player answer historical questions or use historical knowledge to get scenes.

Edit: A bunch of starsigns you can look at :
http://www.wwu.edu/skywise/greekmyth.html

The Greek personified certain stars. Several of these correlate to persons with semi-established appearances.
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Re: Parasites

Postby WonderGamer » Thu Sep 05, 2013 6:33 am

NeerHeer Wrote:I'm having some issues getting the flash to work I think...right now it's just a loop of cricket sounds, a night sky and a shooting star.

Edit: Wait...you have to click the shooting star or the flashes or something?

Took me a bit to figure it out also. You have to click on the flashing stars in order to get a play symbol, then click on that & the video starts.

@NeerHeer,
So far all I'm seeing are footsteps with some background music, then the screen goes black & the music continues playing a little longer until everything goes silent. Is there supposed to be more to it?

Also, you might want to consider placing the flash in a spoiler box so it doesn't actually load until after the box is expanded, given your flash has audio right off the bat & this will prevent the flash from playing sound when the user may not be ready for it. This normally isn't a problem if it's only one flash in the thread, but if you get multiple flashes with sound on the same page & they are all running at once, it tends to get old really fast... :?
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Re: Parasites

Postby Max3000 » Thu Sep 05, 2013 9:00 am

Toyloli Wrote:This is a nice little puzzle that could easily be used for a sweet or romantic game, and the effect is quite nice.
Haha, a good means to hentai game this would be if you put the starsigns in the sky and clicking on the correct pattern of stars would summon the greek god associated with it.

You could even make it educational, by having the player answer historical questions or use historical knowledge to get scenes.

That's a good idea, but actually I planned something different. The little puzzle at the beginning is just for booting the brain. What comes next will also be sort of puzzles, but different and with a little more visual motivation ;)

WonderGamer Wrote:So far all I'm seeing are footsteps with some background music, then the screen goes black & the music continues playing a little longer until everything goes silent. Is there supposed to be more to it?

No, that's all for the moment.

WonderGamer Wrote:Also, you might want to consider placing the flash in a spoiler box so it doesn't actually load until after the box is expanded, given your flash has music right off the bat & this will prevent the flash from playing sound when the user may not be ready for it. This normally isn't a problem if it's only one flash in the thread, but if you get multiple flashes with sound on the same page & they are all running at once, it tends to get old really fast... :?

Thanks for the tip! I'm going to change it as soon as my postings don't need approvement anymore.

What's following:
After the footprints: A girl sitting on a bench when suddenly a UFO appears and the girl gets beamed up into it. Everything accentuated and explained with little texts. Black-out. Jump into the next scene...

I still could need some help: Who is able to sketch a few characters for me? I can do the rest, it can even be made with pencils. More information via PM.
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Re: Parasites

Postby ahrimansiah » Thu Sep 05, 2013 10:08 am

man i LOVE the song! whats the name of it?! where can i find it?!
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Re: Parasites

Postby Max3000 » Thu Sep 05, 2013 10:48 am

ahrimansiah Wrote:man i LOVE the song! whats the name of it?! where can i find it?!


Lonely Souls (Sad Theme) by Rameses B
https://soundcloud.com/ramesesb/lonely-souls-sad-theme

It has a creative commons license which allows to use it even for commercial projects ;) (http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/3.0/)
I just have to put a link into it, as soon as it's finished.
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Re: Parasites

Postby Toyloli » Thu Sep 05, 2013 11:11 am

So basically, we click on the stars in order and the rest is not educational or challenging at all?

Oh I sincerely hope not. I like my porn to require brains as well as muscles :3
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Re: Parasites

Postby Max3000 » Thu Sep 05, 2013 12:26 pm

Toyloli Wrote:So basically, we click on the stars in order and the rest is not educational or challenging at all?

Oh I sincerely hope not. I like my porn to require brains as well as muscles :3


You musn't click the stars in the right order ;D I said for booting the brain, which means that there is more challenging tasks to come ;)

How can I include the muscle part though? Ohhh... I see :shock:
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Re: Parasites

Postby Lex_Liven » Fri Sep 06, 2013 4:18 am

Do you plan to use Gorepete's "Rush" idea?
I'm not sure my english is good, I'm russian. So I'll be please if you will correct me ;) Thank you for understanding.
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Re: Parasites

Postby Max3000 » Fri Sep 06, 2013 9:35 am

Lex_Liven Wrote:Do you plan to use Gorepete's "Rush" idea?

I don't even know what that is, so maybe not or maybe unknowingly yes. Tell me more about it ;)
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Re: Parasites

Postby WonderGamer » Fri Sep 06, 2013 4:39 pm

Max3000 Wrote:How can I include the muscle part though? Ohhh... I see :shock:

LMAO :twisted:
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Re: Parasites

Postby Toyloli » Fri Sep 06, 2013 9:20 pm

It wasn't even a 'good' attempt at innuendo and I got a reaction. Geeze louise you boys are easy to stirr :P
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Re: Parasites

Postby zolpidem » Sat Sep 07, 2013 11:16 pm

Interested so far.
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Re: Parasites

Postby Max3000 » Mon Sep 09, 2013 12:02 am

zolpidem Wrote:Interested so far.

Nice to hear that. :)

But still: I could desperately need some help with the characters. That is - at the moment - a woman (Miss Stuart) and some kinds of aliens. As to what they should look like, I would like to talk about that with YOU via PM.
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Re: Parasites

Postby zolpidem » Mon Sep 09, 2013 6:31 pm

I suppose I could help with "world building" and writing, but I can't draw or code to save my life.
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Re: Parasites

Postby Stickasensi » Tue Sep 10, 2013 5:29 am

I Do quite enjoy your audio selection at the beginning but its too late to tell if the game will be good or not but it has a good amount of potential if u lean it towards a hentai game also, A bit of constructive criticism, Try to clean up the beam of light and give it sort of an aura around the edges and the girl could be given a sort of confused motion as she is beamed up. Oh! and add a small amount of shading/shadow to the bottom of the UFO as if fly's away. I hope your Endeavors end well my friend!

(Id love to see this as a Tentacle hentai XD but thats just me )
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Re: Parasites

Postby Lex_Liven » Tue Sep 10, 2013 5:32 am

Max3000 Wrote:
Lex_Liven Wrote:Do you plan to use Gorepete's "Rush" idea?

I don't even know what that is, so maybe not or maybe unknowingly yes. Tell me more about it ;)

viewtopic.php?p=33491#p33491
Let the game tell about itself :)

I don't understand what will be happen with the girl after abduction. But the name "Parasites" have reminded me "Rush2.swf"
I'm not sure my english is good, I'm russian. So I'll be please if you will correct me ;) Thank you for understanding.
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