Discipline of Revenge (Finished)

[Campo92]

man, can i ask u a favor? can you send me the original file? i can't do some action that u have in your game.

[cookie jar]

Aside from the bug moonblack already described, i'd like to ask the following:

if you pick the correct stair in the temple, you get to a skeletal guardian. No matter how often you defeat him, he just doesn't disappear afterwards. Is that intended oder a similar problem to the infinite "The door closes behind you with a click." loop?

[shin]

That is an unfortunate glitch I'll fix that when I have a chance to.

[shin]

Sorry everyone my last post was a little off. I actually have a lot of things to do so I'm sorry but the
game will have to be pushed back an extra week. I hope everyone is semi ok with this. Thanks
again everyone.

[viper2003923]

hey shin, did you give up on this game? j/w cause its been a month or so since you last updated so i think a lot of us are wondering whether or not your still workin on this game...

[shin]

I will be completely honest and say that I was considering it.
I did make up my mind and the game will continue. I would
like to say that I'm not going to update for a while since classes
are just finishing up. Expect the next update around the first week
of June, unless I randomly get some free time to work. I also would
like to thank Viper2003923 since he finally made me make up my mind.
Thank you everyone and enjoy the update when it comes out.
-Shin

[shin]

Well that and just making this is actually kinda entertaining. Also This game is more an RPG with porn not
necessarily a porn game, or so I would like to say.

[shin]

Alright sorry for a lack of the update. I'm just waiting for some written work that's going to finish off the scenes that I need.
This part has absolutely no replay so I actually need the written work so yeah.

-Shin

[BlueBody]

Looking forward to seeing the new update!
I'll be sure to check back every now and then to see if it has come out

[Maddog1]

Hey, any chance the update will be out any time soon? I noticed you were just waiting on written work, any progress with that?

Really enjoyed the game so far.

Also, I hope the skeleton guardian glitch is fixed! ^^

[StarkePT]

Screenshots of CG art before I try it pl0x

[shin]

I did fix the skeleton glitch and yes I am waiting on written work. Here's what I've decided. I'm going to update the game on Wednesday, no matter what.
If I don't get the written work in, then the scenes for this update might just be abandoned

[Nomad]

This is probably already known, but if you take a wrong stair in the church the message
'The door locks behind you with a click' keeps repeating over and over, forcing a reload.

[shin]

New update for everyone and sorry for the long wait. I can promise that there will have work done much more
quickly so have fun.

[viper2003923]

ok, how do you get past the pirate ship that stops you on the way to the next town? i have the master ship key, but i cant get into the treasure room, am i missin somethin?

[IxFa]

My personal opinion of this game...

You aren't very good with tiles. I see mismatched tiles all over.

You have many maps that look very naked. There is not enough taking up the open area. No variation with the ground, and many buildings are quite plain

The fighting is OK I suppose. It's not too easy, not too hard. I could use a challenge, but as far as I can tell there isn't much to quarrel about.

The H-scenes are terrible, just throwing that out there. It is not your art, for one, the art doesn't even match the characters in fact.

The circumstances of the H-scenes never grabs my attention. I frantically try skipping the text due to how disinterested I am.

You have spelling and grammar mistakes all over.

The story itself is not clearly presented, and MOTIVES... My goodness, I'd like to ask many characters why they decide to do things.

The pink haired girl hits you, twice, then seeing as you're not who she thought, she tells you to buy her a drink and then for little reasons decides to help you out.

The direction of the story is also poor. I had no clue where to go at the start. Kill everyone? Well OK I guess. Church basement? Waaay too dangerous at the start. The enemies(grunts that look like thieves) then respawned, which isn't story relevant. You have to kill them all, they shouldn't reappear. The next area has dark fairies that hit like trucks and take a fair bit of work to kill with a knife. This made me think that going that way was wrong. I went anyways and found it was in fact the correct path. The town is SO BARE. You should have tons of things in a big town like that. You had huge streets and hardly anything in or around them. The festival had very little happening, despite so many people loving it. And where do these people live? The inn? That's not very financially responsible. You need to make the town MUCH smaller, or actually FILL IT.

Sorry if I sound like I'm beating down on you, I just tend to be a bit critical since I've made games with this maker and I've played so many others.

The good part is that I didn't have an issue with the combat up to the clearing of the bridge. It wasn't too tough nor too easy. Enemy placement and scripting could do for a tune up, but the battles themselves weren't really bad.

[maximilianos]

IT'S ALIVE!!!!

i wondered if you'd ever post again... anyway, looking forward to checking the new stuff.

keep going! u might be one of the lucky few that actually FINISH a game on lok (Y)

[shin]

@Viper You shouldn't be missing anything so that's just plain odd. I'll figure out whats wrong. Also I had trouble making locked doors so you actually have to interact with the Treasure room door so that might answer your question.

[viper2003923]

@Viper You shouldn't be missing anything so that's just plain odd. I'll figure out whats wrong. Also I had trouble making locked doors so you actually have to interact with the Treasure room door so that might answer your question.

yeah i tried interacting with the treasure room door and it still says "it's locked"

[Darthan]

@Viper You shouldn't be missing anything so that's just plain odd. I'll figure out whats wrong. Also I had trouble making locked doors so you actually have to interact with the Treasure room door so that might answer your question.

What seems to be the problem you are having with locked doors? There are a few different ways that you can do them depending on how you want it to unlock. If you want maybe I can help you with that.