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Stuff, stuff...

Postby -Soloid- » Wed Apr 25, 2012 8:25 am

Sooo...
I'm reposting my previous topic because it was locked due to flood.
I hope this topic will not be the same, so be wise, and don't forget I'm juste here to share what I do with you. I don't want to create any problem so just think before posting.
I hope I could post more than twice this time.

Hope you enjoy.

Reuploading the previous Swf with Kry and Liz, and adding a stylesheet.
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Postby Biles » Wed Apr 25, 2012 8:41 am

Impressive to say the least. They have the interesting impression of having a younger anatomy. Though I think you should make the lines more curvy and natural instead of too sharp and straight, especially around the knees.
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Postby The Brave » Wed Apr 25, 2012 12:53 pm

I like this style.
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Postby Red.Sheer » Wed Apr 25, 2012 2:05 pm

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Postby the lost angel » Thu Apr 26, 2012 1:40 am

it looks interesting but if i could add my 2 cents the stomach look a little wierd with that line or flap on them just seems like a turn off to me among other small thing its a great idea
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Postby WhiteWolf » Thu Apr 26, 2012 10:40 pm

The new style is pretty interesting. I think that the "bump" thing in the belly might be a layering problem with her legs? Other than that though I really like it
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Postby Hakunoe » Fri Apr 27, 2012 11:24 pm

many people have many different type of things they like, so it quite hard to keep up with people expectation, if your trying to make a model or a game with your own style.
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Postby Ivan-Aedler » Thu Nov 29, 2012 5:24 pm

Wow 7 months has passed, and I wasnt aware of this thread!
I liked them! But as Biles said, I only think her curves could be a little better, as their feet.

Biles said: "lines more curvy and natural instead of too sharp and straight, especially around the knees'.

I only add a thing, too. Their thighs doesnt need to have that upper outline. So it will blend better to their hips ;)

I think,hmmm yes, we can have a game with more complex graphics in the models (we deserve to see it with most quality possible),so its possible to use brush art on them. But the main problem is with the background (in Flash). Or we create a bitmap version, or we convert the vectors to bitmap during game play (an inner function), or we use vectors sparingly (with less curves and less detail). Or we wait for a true Flash player with multithread support, GPU support to aid with vector placement and tesselation, and more optimizations.
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Re: Stuff, stuff...

Postby OwnerOfSuccuby » Thu Nov 29, 2012 6:41 pm

Good work ;) :mrgreen:
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Postby [Brand_Name] » Fri Nov 30, 2012 12:31 am

love it! except for... yeah, hands, feet, and hips. each is a wee bit too big, me thinks
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Re: Stuff, stuff...

Postby Captain Skittles » Wed Dec 19, 2012 4:48 am

Mostly saying the same things others have said, I like the curvier body types, but the arms and legs look disconnected/ separate from the rest of the body on both of them. I would focus on the shoulders and upper thighs for improvements for now anyway.
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Re: Stuff, stuff...

Postby OwnerOfSuccuby » Wed Dec 19, 2012 12:07 pm

-Soloid- = if you decide to make a simple game with the stuff like this i can little help you with coding :roll: ;)
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Postby commissarfuklaw » Fri Dec 28, 2012 3:59 am

i think it my turn out to be a good game
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Postby Deadman61987 » Fri Jan 04, 2013 1:16 am

looks good cant wait to see how this turns out
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Re: Stuff, stuff...

Postby Zikare » Sat Jan 05, 2013 12:13 am

Sa-weet!

Will I get thrown out of this forum if I find the lizard girl more attractive than Krystal? :mrgreen:
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Postby charmdler » Wed Jan 16, 2013 4:48 am

I really enjoy this style, are you planning on using this in some game?
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Re: Stuff, stuff...

Postby Andrewme » Thu Jan 17, 2013 1:11 am

This character model is pretty creative and awesome sir,
I wonder if you can just add some additive suits and armors to it?, for better looks...
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Re: Stuff, stuff...

Postby Starship queen » Tue Jan 22, 2013 12:24 am

looks good
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Re: Stuff, stuff...

Postby -Soloid- » Mon Feb 11, 2013 12:41 pm

Hi there.
Just to post a new thing I made.

Sorry for the bad quality, I made it on after effect, and the clean version is >47Mo. I also post a clean view of my illustrator picture.
Don't worry if you see a black swf, I don't know how to make a preloader, and the file is 11Mo, so, just wait... I suppose.

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Re: Stuff, stuff...

Postby OwnerOfSuccuby » Mon Feb 11, 2013 12:48 pm

Are you using AS2 or AS3 ? can post a preloaders if you want and tell a little how to use them
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