Game project need a writer

[MewHime]

I'm looking for a writer to help me wording h-scene on the game I'm making.

I'm seeking someone who can write a story which separate into a sentence to show up scene by scene to use in hentai-game.

the visual novel styre I mean.

It'll include 15 monster rape scene.
3 yuri screen.
and 1 group rape screen.

post here or pm me your rate if interest, or you can e-mail me at [email protected]

The game's almost done just need a writer to do the h-scene texting like you see in the second screenshot, and improve my story wording.

The main story of the game's done but I need someone to make it smoother cause I'm so bad at english.

I'll paid when all job's done.

[Throbby]

I like slimes and have experience editing; this should be a snap! How much text are we talkin'?

[Duplicity]

So you have written the scenes and just need someone to copy edit/proof read them?
Or do you need everything written from scratch?

And yeah knowing the amount of text you've written/want would be good.

[BlueLight]

Quite frankly i'd do it for free if i could.

[MewHime]

There're two part of work that need to be done

first the main story I already write this part so I need editor to make the sentence smoother or adding some sentence to make the story more interesting
this part's about 1500 line and it already mix with game script like this.

storyArray[101]="tap tap tap tap...";
charRightArray[101]=10;
charLeftArray[101]=10;
charMidArray[101]=10;
itemEffectArray[101]=10;
specialArray[101]=10;
storyArray[102]="tap tap tap tap...";
storyArray[103]="Ami:Nao, where're you.";


storyArray[104]="GAAAHHH";
mapEffArray[104]=3;
charLeftEffect[104]=2;
storyArray[105]="Ami:eahhh";
storyArray[106]="Ami:.....Nao ...Nao";
storyArray[107]="Ami:Put her down you monster!!!";
mapEffArray[108]=3;
storyArray[108]="GAAAHHHHHHH";
storyArray[109]="Na....o";
storyArray[110]="........................";
mapEffArray[110]=20;
storyArray[111]="My vision get blurr, and my consciousness's going to lost.";
storyArray[112]="My body's so heavy, It's so hard even to move";
mapEffArray[112]=50;
storyArray[113]="Am I dying?....";
storyArray[114]=".......";
storyArray[115]="...................";
storyArray[116]="..............................";
storyArray[117]="Suddenly, I see a pink flash cross my head";

the things I you to edit's just the text inside the " "
and if you want to add a new line just type it in place I'll fix the script myself


the second's the sex scene

there're

15 monster rape scene.
3 yuri screen.
and 2 group rape screen.

This part I'm really got no idea on it so I'm need someone to write them from the start each don't have to be long it just moaning insertion or anything that would make the sex scene work.
I'm not sure how much text need in each scene so I'll leave this part to you.
I'm using a image with text for each scene.

and since i plan to sell the game so I think it would be more fair if I give you some budget I offer up to 100$ for the work

[DraconisOminous]

1500 lines, Probably around 7500 words will need to be written or changed by my approximation. I'd say that $100 dollars is probably fair for editing and writing on this one. If you weren't selling the game, doing it for free would likely have been okay.

But, every sentence seems to need editing for the most part if you are going beyond two or three words. The only one so far that I can see doesn't need much in the way of editing would be the line, "Put her down you monster!", which really only needs to lose the extra exclamation points. That one is a bit of nit-picking though.

But some more information on how many characters you can have per line would likely be needed, and if it wraps in the middle of a word, wraps at the beginning, or if it doesn't wrap at all. More of the technical aspects would be nice.

If you have an example of what exactly you would like for your sex scenes, that would be nice as well.

[MewHime]

the maximum character per line 's 80 including space.

and about the sex scene I'll put the slighty animate pic upper and the text below like this.




and if there're anything that have to happen before the pic I'll fade the screen to black

[Throbby]

How about no money up-front, I'll do all the editing and fill in any bits that need filling (heh-heh), and you just give me a small percentage of anything you make on the game?

[camalirth]

I could also write for you. I have past experience with writing erotic stories. I have a forum post here with some stories (viewtopic.php?f=35&t=3405), if you want to read through and look at my writing style. I have no past experience with writing for games or coding, but I can easily supply text and edit existing text. I also don't really care about money, but I wouldn't mind a few dollars.

[bob12321]

The art is great and the concept, from what I can grasp from your previous posts, is interesting as well. I look forward to your gold release. Are you planning on make the game available to the public by posting it on this forum, or are you planning to release it elsewhere?

[[Brand_Name]]

Looks interesting. I would also contribute for free- is there any way we could all write sections of our own then put all our work together for the final product?

[Throbby]

Sorry it took so long to get back to you; I had some real-life projects that ate my time. Check your e-mail, though, 'cause I'm ready to go now!