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Parasites

PostPosted: Wed Sep 04, 2013 9:07 pm
by Max3000
Current Version 2, published Sept 05, 2013[click the spoiler to play]
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Changelog:
  • Added introducing text
  • Added new scenes (girl gets absorbed, UFO flys away, brain scene)
  • Added "play again" button at the end


About the story
In the year 1942 Miss Stuart gets absorbed by an alien UFO. The aliens on board seem to be very intelligent parasites, planning to invade earth and repopulate through humans. They make tests with Miss Stuart before they start their invasion.

Credits
Music/Sounds
https://soundcloud.com/ramesesb/lonely-souls-sad-theme
https://soundcloud.com/pinklentil/fuzzy-ribs
http://soundfxnow.com/sound-fx/cricket-chirping/

Re: Parasites

PostPosted: Thu Sep 05, 2013 2:54 am
by NeerHeer
I'm having some issues getting the flash to work I think...right now it's just a loop of cricket sounds, a night sky and a shooting star.


Edit: Wait...you have to click the shooting star or the flashes or something?

Re: Parasites

PostPosted: Thu Sep 05, 2013 3:59 am
by Toyloli
This is a nice little puzzle that could easily be used for a sweet or romantic game, and the effect is quite nice.
Haha, a good means to hentai game this would be if you put the starsigns in the sky and clicking on the correct pattern of stars would summon the greek god associated with it.

You could even make it educational, by having the player answer historical questions or use historical knowledge to get scenes.

Edit: A bunch of starsigns you can look at :
http://www.wwu.edu/skywise/greekmyth.html

The Greek personified certain stars. Several of these correlate to persons with semi-established appearances.

Re: Parasites

PostPosted: Thu Sep 05, 2013 6:33 am
by WonderGamer
NeerHeer Wrote:I'm having some issues getting the flash to work I think...right now it's just a loop of cricket sounds, a night sky and a shooting star.

Edit: Wait...you have to click the shooting star or the flashes or something?

Took me a bit to figure it out also. You have to click on the flashing stars in order to get a play symbol, then click on that & the video starts.

@NeerHeer,
So far all I'm seeing are footsteps with some background music, then the screen goes black & the music continues playing a little longer until everything goes silent. Is there supposed to be more to it?

Also, you might want to consider placing the flash in a spoiler box so it doesn't actually load until after the box is expanded, given your flash has audio right off the bat & this will prevent the flash from playing sound when the user may not be ready for it. This normally isn't a problem if it's only one flash in the thread, but if you get multiple flashes with sound on the same page & they are all running at once, it tends to get old really fast... :?

Re: Parasites

PostPosted: Thu Sep 05, 2013 9:00 am
by Max3000
Toyloli Wrote:This is a nice little puzzle that could easily be used for a sweet or romantic game, and the effect is quite nice.
Haha, a good means to hentai game this would be if you put the starsigns in the sky and clicking on the correct pattern of stars would summon the greek god associated with it.

You could even make it educational, by having the player answer historical questions or use historical knowledge to get scenes.

That's a good idea, but actually I planned something different. The little puzzle at the beginning is just for booting the brain. What comes next will also be sort of puzzles, but different and with a little more visual motivation ;)

WonderGamer Wrote:So far all I'm seeing are footsteps with some background music, then the screen goes black & the music continues playing a little longer until everything goes silent. Is there supposed to be more to it?

No, that's all for the moment.

WonderGamer Wrote:Also, you might want to consider placing the flash in a spoiler box so it doesn't actually load until after the box is expanded, given your flash has music right off the bat & this will prevent the flash from playing sound when the user may not be ready for it. This normally isn't a problem if it's only one flash in the thread, but if you get multiple flashes with sound on the same page & they are all running at once, it tends to get old really fast... :?

Thanks for the tip! I'm going to change it as soon as my postings don't need approvement anymore.

What's following:
After the footprints: A girl sitting on a bench when suddenly a UFO appears and the girl gets beamed up into it. Everything accentuated and explained with little texts. Black-out. Jump into the next scene...

I still could need some help: Who is able to sketch a few characters for me? I can do the rest, it can even be made with pencils. More information via PM.

Re: Parasites

PostPosted: Thu Sep 05, 2013 10:08 am
by ahrimansiah
man i LOVE the song! whats the name of it?! where can i find it?!

Re: Parasites

PostPosted: Thu Sep 05, 2013 10:48 am
by Max3000
ahrimansiah Wrote:man i LOVE the song! whats the name of it?! where can i find it?!


Lonely Souls (Sad Theme) by Rameses B
https://soundcloud.com/ramesesb/lonely-souls-sad-theme

It has a creative commons license which allows to use it even for commercial projects ;) (http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/3.0/)
I just have to put a link into it, as soon as it's finished.

Re: Parasites

PostPosted: Thu Sep 05, 2013 11:11 am
by Toyloli
So basically, we click on the stars in order and the rest is not educational or challenging at all?

Oh I sincerely hope not. I like my porn to require brains as well as muscles :3

Re: Parasites

PostPosted: Thu Sep 05, 2013 12:26 pm
by Max3000
Toyloli Wrote:So basically, we click on the stars in order and the rest is not educational or challenging at all?

Oh I sincerely hope not. I like my porn to require brains as well as muscles :3


You musn't click the stars in the right order ;D I said for booting the brain, which means that there is more challenging tasks to come ;)

How can I include the muscle part though? Ohhh... I see :shock:

Re: Parasites

PostPosted: Fri Sep 06, 2013 4:18 am
by Lex_Liven
Do you plan to use Gorepete's "Rush" idea?

Re: Parasites

PostPosted: Fri Sep 06, 2013 9:35 am
by Max3000
Lex_Liven Wrote:Do you plan to use Gorepete's "Rush" idea?

I don't even know what that is, so maybe not or maybe unknowingly yes. Tell me more about it ;)

Re: Parasites

PostPosted: Fri Sep 06, 2013 4:39 pm
by WonderGamer
Max3000 Wrote:How can I include the muscle part though? Ohhh... I see :shock:

LMAO :twisted:

Re: Parasites

PostPosted: Fri Sep 06, 2013 9:20 pm
by Toyloli
It wasn't even a 'good' attempt at innuendo and I got a reaction. Geeze louise you boys are easy to stirr :P

Re: Parasites

PostPosted: Sat Sep 07, 2013 11:16 pm
by zolpidem
Interested so far.

Re: Parasites

PostPosted: Mon Sep 09, 2013 12:02 am
by Max3000
zolpidem Wrote:Interested so far.

Nice to hear that. :)

But still: I could desperately need some help with the characters. That is - at the moment - a woman (Miss Stuart) and some kinds of aliens. As to what they should look like, I would like to talk about that with YOU via PM.
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So, if anyone is actually interested and has some spare time, don't hesitate to contact me. I don't bite, promised :twisted:

Re: Parasites

PostPosted: Mon Sep 09, 2013 6:31 pm
by zolpidem
I suppose I could help with "world building" and writing, but I can't draw or code to save my life.

Re: Parasites

PostPosted: Tue Sep 10, 2013 5:29 am
by Stickasensi
I Do quite enjoy your audio selection at the beginning but its too late to tell if the game will be good or not but it has a good amount of potential if u lean it towards a hentai game also, A bit of constructive criticism, Try to clean up the beam of light and give it sort of an aura around the edges and the girl could be given a sort of confused motion as she is beamed up. Oh! and add a small amount of shading/shadow to the bottom of the UFO as if fly's away. I hope your Endeavors end well my friend!

(Id love to see this as a Tentacle hentai XD but thats just me )

Re: Parasites

PostPosted: Tue Sep 10, 2013 5:32 am
by Lex_Liven
Max3000 Wrote:
Lex_Liven Wrote:Do you plan to use Gorepete's "Rush" idea?

I don't even know what that is, so maybe not or maybe unknowingly yes. Tell me more about it ;)

viewtopic.php?p=33491#p33491
Let the game tell about itself :)

I don't understand what will be happen with the girl after abduction. But the name "Parasites" have reminded me "Rush2.swf"