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Re: Another Tail...

Postby elementboy101 » Sat Jan 15, 2011 7:24 am

i hope these scenes will also go into the game plzzz man its AWSOME
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Re: Another Tail...

Postby Ekaitza » Wed Feb 02, 2011 4:06 pm

Pleasssssee!!! Complete this game!!! It promises to be one of the best erotic rpg games ever done.
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Re: Another Tail...

Postby Reaver » Wed Feb 02, 2011 5:36 pm

yeah this game shows a lot of promise
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Re: Another Tail...

Postby Axel » Thu Feb 03, 2011 4:46 pm

Seconded. I'd love to see more of this.
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Re: Another Tail...

Postby AnotherArrow » Wed Feb 16, 2011 5:49 pm

Finally had some free time to work on this again. =D Waiting on my guild to get "raid worthy" is giving me plenty of free time. That, and I'm sick of Archaeology.

Nothing big to report. Just though I'd stop by and post a little update. Code isn't implemented yet, so... yea... you can't change her clothes yet, and I haven't finished the "accessories" yet. But at least you can give me some feedback on her.
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Re: Another Tail...

Postby Kryger » Wed Feb 16, 2011 5:52 pm

AnotherArrow Wrote:Finally had some free time to work on this again. =D Waiting on my guild to get "raid worthy" is giving me plenty of free time. That, and I'm sick of Archaeology.

Nothing big to report. Just though I'd stop by and post a little update. Code isn't implemented yet, so... yea... you can't change her clothes yet, and I haven't finished the "accessories" yet. But at least you can give me some feedback on her.


Really fucking great! Ditto on the WoW thing. BoT trash runs are ftw. Krystal looks sexy as hell man.
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Re: Another Tail...

Postby MirceaKitsune » Wed Feb 16, 2011 9:52 pm

She looks very beautiful! :oops: Can't wait to see more ^_^
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Re: Another Tail...

Postby Lord Panzi » Wed Feb 16, 2011 10:40 pm

one thing
when you can see her stomach/pussy area, give it some lines or something like a slight cameltoe, just so we can see where it is
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Re: Another Tail...

Postby Oriandu » Wed Feb 16, 2011 11:03 pm

Looking good, but the abdominals could use a little more detailing. That and... her neutral face is quite scary, like she's going to rape everyone else instead of the other way around. :P
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Re: Another Tail...

Postby redeyes330 » Thu Feb 17, 2011 12:30 am

Okay, this looks nice. Real nice. Can't wait to see it in action.
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Re: Another Tail...

Postby MrBear » Thu Feb 17, 2011 2:56 am

Very nice dude. Your really talented with flash, lets see if you can out do yourself though :)
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Re: Another Tail...

Postby trunks2585 » Thu Feb 17, 2011 3:41 am

Good to see updates from you.
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Re: Another Tail...

Postby AnotherArrow » Thu Feb 17, 2011 5:57 am

Lord Panzi Wrote:one thing
when you can see her stomach/pussy area, give it some lines or something like a slight cameltoe, just so we can see where it is

There is actually a very slight cameltoe in her um... cowgirl position... but the suit is a little too dark to see the lines (zoom in and see if you see it :D ). Other clothes may make it a little more visible. As for the profile area, nothing I did seem to look right... so I gave up on it for the sake of moving on with other things (in fact, I decided to scrap a lot of in progress work just to get moving... no more front and quarter views of the head :cry: )

Oriandu Wrote:Looking good, but the abdominals could use a little more detailing. That and... her neutral face is quite scary, like she's going to rape everyone else instead of the other way around. :P
I tried to make each symbol (body part) reusable for various poses, the end result meant having to reduce some detailing. There will be a "belt" accessory around her waist, so... it shouldn't seem so bland there. As for her face, :lol: yea, i keep tweaking her eyes and left them in that state at some point...
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Re: Another Tail...

Postby Unholy Sonic » Thu Feb 17, 2011 7:28 am

Great work, very nice.
Tho on the 2nd picture to the left, when she is standing up in that position, I think he brest should be a little more tossed to the right, it feels a bit centered when she is slightly facing to the right.
Also, when we can see her back, could you make a little hole where her tail is starting? Cause it feels like the tail isnt part of the body but more part of the suit.

Other then that, I'm waiting for an epic doggystyle, on all four not like the right one but more bend-over like.

Aaand... awesome job your doing, can't wait for the rest of the work done.
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Re: Another Tail...

Postby searingdark » Thu Feb 17, 2011 9:27 am

im liking the character updates they look nice, and i like the as far as you could get lol
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Re: Another Tail...

Postby MirceaKitsune » Thu Feb 17, 2011 3:00 pm

Oriandu Wrote:That and... her neutral face is quite scary, like she's going to rape everyone else instead of the other way around. :P


That actually sounds like a great thing! Couldn't help it :D

On a separate note, these sprites look a lot like the way Comet draws Krystal (which is nice). eg: http://img.booru.org/r34//images/538/5a ... 1261f5.jpg, http://e621.net/data/a4/d8/a4d83547cda2 ... 2530c1.jpg
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Re: Another Tail...

Postby superEXT » Thu Feb 17, 2011 3:25 pm

@AnotherArrow

Those Krystal sprites are gorgeous and well designed. Apart from the permanently closed up fists, they're ace. If they can be animated and have secondary animation(like jiggle physics) that would be equally awesome.

If it's not been mentioned already (Just jumped into this thread), will there be any enemies other than Sharpclaws? Like tentacle monsters perhaps?
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Re: Another Tail...

Postby Axel » Sat Feb 19, 2011 3:44 am

Wow, I'm taken away, haha.
Can't wait until we get a shot of that.
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Re: Another Tail...

Postby Oriandu » Sat Feb 19, 2011 8:32 pm

Yar, the more I look at this Krystal sheet, the more I like it. Easily the best Krystal on any project on these boards.
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Re: Another Tail...

Postby swirls » Wed Feb 23, 2011 6:05 pm

Looking pretty nice, keep it up!
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