first quite terible flash (futa at first but most of its no)

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first quite terible flash (futa at first but most of its no)

Postby FredPieman » Thu Jan 13, 2011 6:57 am

well here's my first flash thingy blah...
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Re: first quite terible flash (futa)

Postby anonymous174 » Thu Jan 13, 2011 7:16 am

I like the mermaid/wolf part the cum could use work, it's blob-like. But pretty good for a first flash, don't sell yourself short. :)
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Re: first quite terible flash (futa)

Postby Eggplants » Thu Jan 13, 2011 2:43 pm

using shape tweens for cum is something I think we all need to try before realising it totally sucks :lol: I tried so hard to make it work once but with how long it takes to have it not screw up on you you you're probably better off going frame by frame, because yeah it's a little daunting at first but it's not actually that hard.
but Donkey's right. for a first attempt this is definitely better than some, great start. be nice if it stopped at the end though instead of going to the black screen.
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Re: first quite terible flash (futa)

Postby FredPieman » Thu Jan 13, 2011 10:25 pm

I redid it its not futa anymore
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Re: first quite terible flash (futa)

Postby anonymous174 » Fri Jan 14, 2011 12:54 am

The cum and smoothness of the flash is greatly improved it still kinda seems like a ruptured paint can though when he finishes.
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Re: first quite terible flash (futa)

Postby haloman » Fri Jan 14, 2011 3:21 am

I Like this! its smooth. The cum obviously needs work =P i like the Liz girl fingering thing. if you plan on extending it heres a few ideas:
threesome
double tit fuck (like in 0.2)
double ride.
Just throwin those out there.
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Re: first quite terible flash (futa)

Postby FredPieman » Fri Jan 14, 2011 5:10 am

i redid it again this time the come isn't as bad but its still bad :cry: and the forward buttons weird but if u get it in just the RIGHT corner it'll work
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Re: first quite terible flash (futa at first but most of its

Postby anonymous174 » Fri Jan 14, 2011 6:12 am

Oooh, I like the double blow job concept.
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Re: first quite terible flash (futa at first but most of its

Postby haloman » Fri Jan 14, 2011 4:53 pm

Alrite looking good! the Zoras hadis showing through the Liz girls face durring the double blow. The wolfs right knee looks disconnected as well.
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