by www.porncritique.lol » Fri Dec 19, 2014 8:59 pm
I really enjoy this game, but I noticed a lot of spelling errors. I understand English isn't your first language, but it messes up the experience a bit, so I'd like to help correct those errors, I've fixed the intro dialogue below, if you want more corrections just ask and I'll do my part to improve the game!
Krystal: Mission's log, I'm investigating the mysterious call, this planet has some spectral feeling, I feel like I'm being watched from every direction. I can feel some powerful energy, warm energy... It's as if my body reacts to it, I feel so hot...
I can't find anything here, I'm returning to The Great Fox. (The Starfox Teams Mothership)
I'm hit! Some sort of powerful energy collided with my ship, I've taken critical damage! I can't hold my Arwing (Starfox's Fighter Ships, the one krystal is in)
steady, I'm going to fall! Systems won't respond, I can't eject! I can't believe I'm gong to die like this! If you are listening, Fox, these are my final words, I want...
Sharpclaws:Hey guys, look what I found! So beautiful... (The Sharpclaws aren't the smartest) Hey, don't be rough! She might be useful. Well, I think we could sell her for a high price, but for now let's have some fun with her. She's one tough bitch, she survived falling from the sky! Everything got burnt, even her clothes if she had any, but she's perfectly healthy, yes, let's have some fun!
Long Necked Anthro (don't know her name):Hey you, stop fucking that bitch! Are you stupid? Haven't you heard of STD's?
Sharpclaw: What?! I'm perfectly healthy! I'm not going to infect this lady!
Long Necked Anthro: I wasn't referring to you, she might be sick! If you want to sell her to my boss we need to examine her. So hurry, bring her to me, go get your money with my boss.
Sharp Claw: You are lucky I need the money, take this bitch, I'll go for my money later.
Long Necked Anthro: You're lucky too, I would kill you if you hadn't sold her. See you later, gentlemen. I hope to see you on the ranch!
???: She survived that crash landing, I'm glad she doesn't have any diseases, but I think she will require further examination, let's begin the anal examination.
The Boss: So tight, she has a very healthy ass hole! Also strong anal muscles, this ass will be very useful to our business. It feels so warm.
Krystal: What?
The Boss:Oh look, she's awake! Good morning! You had a hard time falling from the sky didn't you?
Krystal: Where am I?
The Boss: relax, you need to rest, you don't seem to be wounded, however we still need to be sure you're okay.
Krystal: I'm serious, where am I?
The Boss: You are at my furry ranch! It's a magical place where clients can be pleasured by furries! You'll need to use your sexual skills to make our customers happy. From the way you look, I think you'll be happy here!
Krystal: What are you talking about? I'm not going to stay at a brothel! I'm out of here!
The Boss: I'm sorry to hear that, but you don't have a choice. Things have been getting hard and I really need extra girls. You can't leave, I really need you! To be sure you'll stay here you have a special device. It's somewhere in your body, and it'll explode if you try to escape the ranch! Things are hard and I really need extra
girls. Surely you need some time to think about it. Besides,you're still tired, so just go to sleep, you'll feel better afterward, and you'll be happier about your new home! Ladies, please take our new friend to her room. I'll explain her duties when she wakes up.
Squirrels (sandy?): Sure master!